Photocard My Fanfic Criticism Review

First off, I apologize for posting this on a fanfic. If you're a fan of photocards, I'd appreciate it if you could take a look at this. I'm always jotting down any inconveniences or issues I have with photocards. #Edit (8.10) The title was misleading, so I changed it from <Photocard Criticism Review> to <Photocard Fanfic Criticism Review>