"deviation"

Deviation | You're unlucky

It was quite dark in the early evening.

A cold, chilly air lingers inside the upscale restaurant.

The heroine, with her arms crossed, biting her fingernails and looking at the distant mountains with a displeased gaze.

It was none other than the clerk who broke the flow of cold air.

점원

Would you like to order..? (Note

여주 엄마

Oh, yes. I'll order.

여주 엄마

Everyone wants to eat...

여주 엄마

........

여주 엄마

Just give me course A..ㅎ;;

점원

Yes, I'll bring it to you right away~

The clerk left, and the atmosphere became cold again.

Mom's boyfriend... no,

Jimin's father opens his mouth.

지민 아빠

.......

지민 아빠

Now that it's come to this, I'd like to tell you what my mother and I think...

이여주

......Marriage? (Cold

여주 엄마

Heroine, me and Jimin's dad.

여주 엄마

I truly love you. I don't want to lose someone like you..ㅎ

박지민

.......

이여주

If my mom and that man marry,,

이여주

I am this king...

이여주

I'm going to become siblings with this king... no, Park Jimin?!!

여주 엄마

.......

지민 아빠

Yeah, that's probably it.

이여주

her,,

이여주

Hey, Park Jimin...

이여주

You don't mind? You and I living together as siblings in the same house...!!

박지민

........

For some reason, Park Jimin keeps his mouth shut and doesn't open it.

Jimin's father, who discovered the scene, asks back in an affectionate tone.

지민 아빠

Jimin, what do you think?

박지민

.......

이여주

....... (a look that tells me to speak well

박지민

I am......

Gulp_ ]

But, Park Jimin... this guy.

My hands were shaking...

Clearly, Park Jimin is hiding his feelings.

When I see him caressing his trembling hands and trying to smile like that while answering,

박지민

If Dad wants it... it's all okay... haha

이여주

.......

이여주

Oh my... (mumbles)

지민 아빠

Really? lol

지민 아빠

Then now just the female lead...

이여주

I do not approve of this marriage.

이여주

To me, there is only one person called father.

이여주

Even though he is in heaven now...

이여주

To me, he is my father.

여주 엄마

Lee Yeo-ju,!!

지민 아빠

.......

지민 아빠

Hold on..ㅎ

지민 아빠

I can understand,,

지민 아빠

It's surprising that one day someone like me will become a father.

여주 엄마

..... still...

지민 아빠

Then let's do it like this,

In the end, we decided to try living together first.

It's not like we're registering it or having a wedding ceremony.

It was a decision made because it was less of a burden on both of us.

이여주

Huh, cohabitation?

이여주

How is that different from marriage... (mumbles)

이여주

It's the same thing as having to live in the same house with people you don't even know well.

The female protagonist came out of the restaurant quite nervously.

And it was Jimin who followed her to catch that heroine.

박지민

Oh, heroine...!!!

이여주

....... (ignore

A word Jimin blurted out to the female protagonist as she walked away, trying hard to ignore Jimin's call.

박지민

I'm sorry... (mumbles)

이여주

.......

이여주

....... (pause

Jimin runs towards the heroine who has stopped walking, his hair fluttering.

Then, Yeoju looks at Jimin.

박지민

Oh my......gasp.......

박지민

I'm sorry... Yeoju......

이여주

.......

이여주

What are you always sorry about?!! (annoying

이여주

Kim Do-woon said he was sorry when he hit you

이여주

Now you're even apologizing for the cohabitation issue?!!

박지민

.......

박지민

....... sorry....

이여주

Sorry again..?!!!!!

박지민

No, that's...

박지민

No, that's... Meh.....

이여주

.......

이여주

You're unlucky...

I grew up as an only daughter for 18 years.

Thanks to the value of money, I grew up without any lack.

When I feel the empty space of my father.

I used to fill that void with money.

If you had money, you could have anything.

I used to think that if I had money, I could achieve anything I wanted.

But it was only today that I finally realized.

That human relationships cannot be exchanged for money.

and....

김도운

Huh? Park Jimin? lol

박지민

.......!!

김도운

What is this, bullying? LOL

김도운

But... why are you two here at this time?..ㅎ

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The challenge of an ignorant writer!!!!!!!

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If it's too much, I'll try to do one series every two days.

Instead, please leave a comment after reading it.

Do you know why so many writers worry about "lurking" and have a hard time with it?

This is something I realized after writing fanfiction for about two years.

I'm not sure, but I think the best ranking is determined by the number of comments about 80% due to the nature of this FanPlus app.

Because of this, the rankings fluctuate greatly, going up and down overnight.

Of course, I don't write fanfics just because they're best.

But many writers around me wrote hard.

I get really upset when I see the number of comments compared to the number of views.

This part is the same for me too..

So (personally) even if I write the next episode, I tend to wait until the comments are somewhat filled.

As I said before, the best ranking is determined by the number of comments.

It may not seem like much, but it is incredibly stressful for me and other writers.

I'm just being honest.

I'm not good at pretending to be good or humble.

Even if you really don't want to care, the rankings are what appears on the fanfly main page.

That's why you can't help but be concerned about lurking.

I don't think anything will change today..

You writers know better than anyone that there will be people who are just watching and people who are just chatting.

Still, there's a reason why every plum blossom has the phrase "Please touch me" attached to it.

We write articles and receive serial fees.

It's not like I get cookies like Wentoon lol

I'm just serializing it out of a promise and sense of responsibility to my readers, and I get strength from reading the comments.

And Sonting is a small wish of writers who rack their brains for 2-3 hours.

I think that small wish is mutual trust and courtesy.